

Hi my name is Rayona and I'm in 5th grade. I like to play outside and have fun.
Heres my story about one spooky night.
ONE SPOOKY DARK NIGHT
One cold and dark night Georgie was walking down a really quite street, then all of a sudden he stopped and saw horrible sight, it was a haunted house. .he could hear a little old lady talking like there was someone in the house.Georgie can hear the cold and sharp wind trying to break the tree's branches.He could see dust coming from the ground like there is something about to bust out of it. Georgie can also hear dogs screaming for help like somebody is about get them. his ears can hear rumbling in the house like there's people running up and down the halls. His eyes see the rusty lights going off and on like they are blowing out. Georgie can also see smoke coming from the ground like on a movie set. He can hear the door creek for help like there are zombies coming after it. All of a sudden he feels somebody's hand tap his arm. Georgie starts running, as he is running he looks back and sees a man that is possessed and he is running after him. As Georgie is running he trips over a rock and falls,the possessed man trys to kill until Georgie's friend Andrew hits the possessed man in the back of the head with a crowbar and the possessed man passes out. They start running again, as they are running they see a abandend factory and they start running to it, when they got in they started walking and all of a sudden the lights turned on and Did you turn on the lights?" Andrew said, "Well i didn't turn on the lights and you didn't turn on the lights then who did? "I did!! somebody said, Georgie and Andrew went frozen again!! As they were standing there, they turned around to see who was talking to them. They were thinking in there minds that the possessed man was back, but when they turned around it wasn't the possessed man it was a woman. She looked liked she was in her late 20s, they saw that she wasn't possessed, she was a normal human being,"Who are you?" Georgie asked,"My name is Alyssa, and who are you two!!? Georgie said his name first, and then Andrew said his name. "Why are you here?" Andrew asked terrified, " I'm here because I am the only one that's not possessed!!" Alyssa said, "Why are you here?" " We're here because we are running away from a man that was possessed,we almost got killed" Andrew cried, "Well I'm glad you guys didnt get killed because I would be the only person alive!!, Alyssa told them. Suddenly they heard a loud "BOOM", when they turned to see what it was, they couldn't believe their eyes, as the door opened in coming was a million zombies just waiting to feed on their blood. Andrew,Alyssa, and Georgie stood there frozen for a minute, then all at the same time they bursted into a sprint. As they were running, Andrew triped and got stuck under a car
Comments (26)
Kaylee5h said
at 12:52 pm on Oct 13, 2010
hi hi hi hi hi
Rayona5h said
at 1:03 pm on Oct 13, 2010
hi kaylee
Kaylee5h said
at 12:55 pm on Oct 14, 2010
happy b-day
Rayona5h said
at 12:55 pm on Oct 14, 2010
thank you!!!!!!!!
Peter5c said
at 1:03 pm on Oct 14, 2010
Happy happy happy B-B-B- day day day.
Rayona5h said
at 1:04 pm on Oct 14, 2010
thank you peter
Peter5c said
at 1:03 pm on Oct 14, 2010
and your welcome
Nate Krulish said
at 6:48 am on Oct 15, 2010
Can't wait to see what happens with this story. I have a feeling that Georgie is going to have a rough day...!
Rayona5h said
at 1:38 pm on Oct 21, 2010
i know right
Rachel5h said
at 5:21 pm on Oct 21, 2010
Love t
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Rayona5h said
at 1:51 pm on Nov 16, 2010
thank you
Josh5m said
at 1:49 pm on Oct 22, 2010
that is really good how did you think of that and you are on my link
Rayona5h said
at 4:13 pm on Nov 16, 2010
ok cool
Payton5c said
at 4:14 pm on Oct 29, 2010
i really like that is sounds grate and scary
Rayona5h said
at 4:13 pm on Nov 16, 2010
yeah i know right
YeChan5c said
at 10:53 am on Nov 25, 2010
I JUST HAVE TO READ THE NEXT PART
Payton5c said
at 10:00 pm on Nov 25, 2010
i like your page a lot
Andrew5c said
at 7:11 pm on Nov 26, 2010
nice story... keep up the good work!!;)
Rayona5h said
at 5:07 pm on Jan 20, 2011
thanks
Edwin5h said
at 8:08 pm on Feb 7, 2011
add more words o:
Rayona5h said
at 12:15 pm on Feb 8, 2011
wow ok
Kaylee5h said
at 12:58 pm on May 10, 2011
hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi
Kiarra5m said
at 11:23 am on Jun 22, 2011
add some links
Andrew5c said
at 2:12 pm on Aug 7, 2011
wattsp rayona
Rayona5h said
at 3:26 pm on Apr 12, 2012
hey andrew!!!... i remembered my password.... :( i miss u soo much!!!
Breanna5m said
at 9:47 am on Aug 27, 2011
hi rayona
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