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Rayona5h

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Hi my name is Rayona and I'm in 5th grade. I like to play outside and have fun.

Heres my story about one spooky night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ONE SPOOKY DARK NIGHT

One cold and dark night Georgie was walking down a really quite street, then all of a sudden he stopped and saw  horrible sight, it was a haunted house. .he could hear a little old lady talking like there was someone in the house.Georgie can hear the cold and sharp wind trying to break  the tree's branches.He could see dust coming from the ground like there is something about to bust out of it. Georgie can also hear dogs screaming for help like somebody is about get them. his ears can hear rumbling in the house like there's  people running up and down the halls. His eyes see the rusty lights going off and on like they are blowing out. Georgie can also see smoke coming from the ground like on a movie set. He can hear the door creek for help  like there are zombies coming after it. All of a sudden he feels somebody's hand tap his arm. Georgie starts running, as he is running he looks back and sees a man that is possessed and he is running after him. As Georgie is running he trips over a rock and falls,the possessed man trys to kill until Georgie's friend Andrew hits the possessed man in the back of the head with a crowbar and the possessed man passes out. They start running again, as they are running they see a abandend factory and they start running to it, when they got in they started walking and all of a sudden the lights turned on and Did you turn on the lights?" Andrew said, "Well i didn't turn  on the lights  and you  didn't turn on the lights then who did? "I did!! somebody said, Georgie and Andrew went frozen again!! As they were standing there, they turned around to see who was talking to them. They were thinking in there minds that the possessed man was back, but when they turned around it wasn't the possessed man it was a woman. She looked liked she was in her late 20s, they saw that she wasn't possessed, she was a normal human being,"Who are you?" Georgie asked,"My name is Alyssa, and who are you two!!? Georgie said his name first, and then Andrew said his name. "Why are you here?" Andrew asked terrified, " I'm here because I am the only one that's not possessed!!" Alyssa said, "Why are you here?" " We're here because we are running away from a man that was possessed,we almost got killed" Andrew cried, "Well I'm glad you guys didnt get killed because I would be the only person alive!!, Alyssa told them. Suddenly they heard a loud "BOOM", when they turned to see what it was, they couldn't believe their eyes, as the door opened in coming was a million zombies just waiting to feed on their blood. Andrew,Alyssa, and Georgie stood there frozen for a minute, then all at the same time they bursted into a sprint. As they were running, Andrew triped and got stuck under a car

 

 

 

Comments (26)

Kaylee5h said

at 12:52 pm on Oct 13, 2010

hi hi hi hi hi

Rayona5h said

at 1:03 pm on Oct 13, 2010

hi kaylee

Kaylee5h said

at 12:55 pm on Oct 14, 2010

happy b-day

Rayona5h said

at 12:55 pm on Oct 14, 2010

thank you!!!!!!!!

Peter5c said

at 1:03 pm on Oct 14, 2010

Happy happy happy B-B-B- day day day.

Rayona5h said

at 1:04 pm on Oct 14, 2010

thank you peter

Peter5c said

at 1:03 pm on Oct 14, 2010

and your welcome

Nate Krulish said

at 6:48 am on Oct 15, 2010

Can't wait to see what happens with this story. I have a feeling that Georgie is going to have a rough day...!

Rayona5h said

at 1:38 pm on Oct 21, 2010

i know right

Rachel5h said

at 5:21 pm on Oct 21, 2010

Love t
Your
Aro ey

Rayona5h said

at 1:51 pm on Nov 16, 2010

thank you

Josh5m said

at 1:49 pm on Oct 22, 2010

that is really good how did you think of that and you are on my link

Rayona5h said

at 4:13 pm on Nov 16, 2010

ok cool

Payton5c said

at 4:14 pm on Oct 29, 2010

i really like that is sounds grate and scary

Rayona5h said

at 4:13 pm on Nov 16, 2010

yeah i know right

YeChan5c said

at 10:53 am on Nov 25, 2010

I JUST HAVE TO READ THE NEXT PART

Payton5c said

at 10:00 pm on Nov 25, 2010

i like your page a lot

Andrew5c said

at 7:11 pm on Nov 26, 2010

nice story... keep up the good work!!;)

Rayona5h said

at 5:07 pm on Jan 20, 2011

thanks

Edwin5h said

at 8:08 pm on Feb 7, 2011

add more words o:

Rayona5h said

at 12:15 pm on Feb 8, 2011

wow ok

Kaylee5h said

at 12:58 pm on May 10, 2011

hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi

Kiarra5m said

at 11:23 am on Jun 22, 2011

add some links

Andrew5c said

at 2:12 pm on Aug 7, 2011

wattsp rayona

Rayona5h said

at 3:26 pm on Apr 12, 2012

hey andrew!!!... i remembered my password.... :( i miss u soo much!!!

Breanna5m said

at 9:47 am on Aug 27, 2011

hi rayona

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