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 Hi my name is Noah and I want to tell you a little bit about myself .  The first thing is that my favorite sports are football, hockey, and baseball but I like to play football the best because you can tackle people.  The second thing is that my favorite subjects are Math, Writing, Reading I like Math the best because it makes you think.  I live with my brother, mom, and dad.  In school I get great grades.

 

 

   Oh and I just thought I would say thank you to Mr. Krulish because now I am in charge of something and now I can do anything I want with my web page and every body around the world can see what I do on my web page.  Now I can tell you my story and that is for everybody that is going to be reading this k so here it goes!

 

 

One sunny day Noah, Kyle, and Daniel set sail on their ship called the Meadow Point elementry.  They are looking for gold and a goblin to take down if they take down and kill the goblin then they will be rewarded a better ship because the ship that they have now called the Meadow Point elementry is a very old ship it is almost 100 years old.  Noah is worried the ship will sink but Kyle doesn't think it is going to happen.  The ship is loaded with canons, swords, and food they are planing to make this trip a 2 month trip but it might be longer.  They have to arrive at the island in 1 month to even get to the gold and the goblin.  So one day the three of them are sitting in the crows nest of the ship when they start to hear things, Kyle thinks its big waves, Noah thinks its a storm, and Daniel thinks its a pirate ship that is coming towards them.  Who is RIGHT?  Well Kyle, Noah, and Daniel went out onto the poop deck yo see what the noise was so they went out and saw this huge ship with about 100 pirates on the deck.  Kyle was amazed Noah was amazed too but Daniel was not amazed Daniel was scared he knew that the pirates wanted to kill them.  Next thing you now you see cannons coming out of the ship, pirates swinging from ropes, and you hear pirates saying "fire on the poop deck''.  A big cannon ball came fling towards their ship and good thing kyle pulled Noah and Daniel out of the way or else they would of died.  Well Kyle and Noah didn't die but the cannon ball that the other ship shot hit their ship and made a hole in it but good thing they have a cement wall on the inside of the ship because the cannon ball hit the wood and tore right through it.  If they didn't have that cement wall inside of there ship it would of sank.  The next thing the three of them did was go straight into the cargo room and get some guns and a cannon ball to shoot at the other pirate ship, so they went outside to the poop deck and ducked behind a crate and started to load thier guns so they loaded their guns and stated to fire.  The next thing you know there is metal flying every where one of the cannon balls hits Daniel in the head he fly's like ten feet but doesn't die instead he is just knocked out cold.  So Kyle and Noah go over to Daniel but Daniel is not there aparently he fell through the floor.  Now it is there first night on the Meadow Point and every has had a great time so far Daniel is a little bit hurt from  the cannon ball but he says he is okay but i don't believe him. Kyle says he is board because he wants to get to the island already to find gold and slay the goblin.  Now they are sleeping and it is very loud it is like a earthquake because of Daniel's snoring you don't want to be around when Daniel is snoring because you will never get to sleep! 

Comments (17)

Adrian5h said

at 5:07 pm on Oct 7, 2010

what is next

Jose5m said

at 5:49 pm on Oct 7, 2010

good story.

Noah5m said

at 6:08 pm on Oct 7, 2010

thanks jose

Noah5m said

at 6:10 pm on Oct 7, 2010

this webpage is awsome

Jose5m said

at 6:13 pm on Oct 7, 2010

I agree with you noah.

YeChan5c said

at 2:52 pm on Oct 8, 2010

finally!you made the story.and it is the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kitana5c said

at 4:47 pm on Oct 8, 2010

AWESOME story!

Noah5m said

at 7:02 pm on Oct 8, 2010

really YeChan so many !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YeChan5c said

at 6:43 am on Oct 9, 2010

what?this is awesome!

Nate Krulish said

at 9:36 pm on Oct 10, 2010

Hey! Great beginning! I'm very curious about what happens next. I like how the concrete stopped the cannon ball. The Meadow Point must be one strong ship! Sail on Meadow Point!! You might want to think about making this story even better by proofreading...edit this baby so everyone in the world can tell how great of a writer you are.
Good job Noah!

Nate Krulish said

at 9:36 pm on Oct 10, 2010

Come help us write a story:
http://meadowpoint.pbworks.com/kyleah5h

Peter5c said

at 6:24 pm on Oct 12, 2010

I like the story.

Edwin5h said

at 3:14 pm on Oct 13, 2010

i like the story

Kyle5c2 said

at 4:34 pm on Oct 30, 2010

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Alan5h said

at 6:03 pm on Jan 12, 2011

nic e where r your links i can not find them on my typeing divice thingy mujiger

Samantha5h said

at 2:08 pm on Feb 3, 2011

COOL STORY

Noah5m said

at 1:04 pm on May 5, 2011

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