Hey! I like playing my guitar to play good songs. I love rock musics. It is so cool in my opinion. I love playing Halo - all the Halo games. And also I like Grand Theft Auto and I like Mortal Combat. Well I like lots of games. Now to go into guitars. I love guitars. I like stars ones and ones that look like fire. Well I have to go see all you guys later.
The Masters
Once opon a time, there was a man called, Adrian.While he was walking, people came and attacked.!!! Adrian got a sword and attacked and he won. He said "Why did the attack?" He dropped the sword. Then he found an old man being cut by people! Adrian felt in horror so he fought back. He got a pistle and shot them. The old man said " thankyou.... here have my sword." He got his sword and trained himself. All of a sudden, a cry for help, "help!!!" Adrian ran as fast as he can but he got tricked! part 1 end.
part2 starts here. The man started to be fearless, and tried to kill Adrian, but Adrian was too strong for his new sword. They fought and fought and fought, until finally, Adrian sliced the dead or no dead arm of, it was the hard fight yet then Adrian killed him. Adrian was walking then he saw some one in a truck and said, "finally the last fiter 100 down 1 to go ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then he thought he killed him but.... Adrian was on the truck and sliced the car and jump, tug, and roll. He got up and saw the person and said " your dead you here me, dead OH and my name is pain!" Adrian said what was that all about. End of part 2
part3 here. Adrian came in a store and some one said "it's the chosen one!" Everybody started to clap and Adrian said, "Were? You?". The man said, "me" "cool" "oh it is not cool people trying to kill the chosen one all of them are dead and your our only hope to save the world. "What.... I can't save the world i'm just a guy!",said Adrian. The man said, "Here is a Sora Kitana. It is so powerful any other sword can't cut it!"Adrian said, Tthank you I guss." End of part3
part4 here
So Adrian was walking and bot a sword holder and got a team the other pepole were named Roberto, Tyler, Ian, and Vinsent. so we finally came to Pian Torcher Place. Pian came and fot us . He was so hard we all most died. But Roberto killed him with his war hammer. So we walk and walk and walk. part4 end
part 5 here
But there was a strong person named, Big Bill. He had a war hammer and tough armer so we can only kill him in the back side! So we tried and tried, but it was too hard we almost died! Adrian yelled, "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He glided black and sliced him in half. Tyler said, "How did you do that?" Adrian said, "I...I don't know I just got mad." Roberto said "Hey theres a tape recorder." Adrian got a tape recorder and it said " last filter. I'll come to kill you. Get ready for me Shingero. End of part 5 :O
part 6 here.
Adrian, Tyler, Ian, and Vinsent got new weapons and they were strong. Adrian got a black sword. Roberto got a heavy war hammer. Tyler got a pistol and a shotgun. Ian got a black suit and a knife to assen people. Last Vinsent got a bow and arrow. end of part 6
part 7 could this be the last?
It's been 4 years of training, now to fight Shingero. Adrian said "this is it Shingero's castle." Shingero came out and killed Vinsent in one shot Ian tryed to kill him but Shingero destroyed him.
See this please. :)
Comments (16)
YeChan5c said
at 4:06 pm on Oct 7, 2010
awesome!but kan i edit some of that
Adrian5h said
at 4:25 pm on Oct 7, 2010
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Adrian5h said
at 4:26 pm on Oct 7, 2010
Why?
Jose5m said
at 4:41 pm on Oct 7, 2010
good story but i cant understand some words.
Adrian5h said
at 4:42 pm on Oct 7, 2010
sorry
Nate Krulish said
at 9:23 pm on Oct 10, 2010
Hey Adrian, this is a great story. You have very good ideas. You should think about YeChan's offer to help with some of the words. You know, he doesn't have to change it, he could just go into your page and then put what he thinks should be change in your story in a DIFFERENT color and then you could decide if you like that change or not...what do you think?
Jose5m said
at 4:44 pm on Oct 7, 2010
it's still good that's what i got to say.
Adrian5h said
at 4:52 pm on Oct 7, 2010
ok :)
Jose5m said
at 2:44 pm on Oct 8, 2010
hey yours is mush better now that you 5 chapters.
Jose5m said
at 3:49 pm on Oct 8, 2010
this awsnome
YeChan5c said
at 6:05 am on Oct 11, 2010
thank adrian.and why i want to edit this is like mr.krulish was saying,CREATIVE.sounds ok if i edit yours......not to change yoe story?
Giselle5m said
at 3:09 pm on Oct 12, 2010
asome story adrian
Mikaela5h said
at 3:20 pm on Oct 13, 2010
cool story Adrain
Jose5m said
at 2:00 pm on Nov 9, 2010
i still say it is awsome
Giselle5m said
at 6:01 pm on Nov 9, 2010
NIce
Jose5m said
at 2:01 pm on Jan 28, 2011
Hey Adrian this is great with that slideshow
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