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Hey! I like playing my guitar to play good songs.  I love rock musics. It is so cool in my opinion.  I love playing Halo - all the Halo games.  And also I like Grand Theft Auto and I like Mortal Combat. Well I like lots of games. Now to go into guitars.  I love guitars. I  like stars ones and ones that look like fire. Well I have to go see all you guys later.                               

                                                                                     The Masters

 

          Once opon a time, there was a man called, Adrian.While he was walking,  people came and attacked.!!! Adrian got a sword and attacked and he won. He said "Why did the attack?" He dropped the sword. Then he found an old man being cut by people! Adrian felt in horror so he fought back. He got a pistle and shot them. The old man said " thankyou.... here have my sword." He got his sword and trained himself. All of a sudden, a cry for help, "help!!!" Adrian ran as fast as he can but he got tricked! part 1 end.                   

 

 

 

 

part2 starts here.   The man started to be fearless, and tried to kill Adrian, but Adrian was too strong for his new sword. They fought and fought and fought, until finally, Adrian sliced the dead or no dead arm of,  it was the  hard fight yet then Adrian killed him. Adrian was walking then he saw some one in a truck and said, "finally the last fiter 100 down 1 to go ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then he thought he killed him but.... Adrian was on the truck and sliced the car and jump, tug, and roll. He got up and saw the person and said " your dead you here me, dead OH and my name is pain!" Adrian said what was that all about. End of part 2

 

 

part3 here. Adrian came in a store and some one said "it's the chosen one!" Everybody started to clap and Adrian said, "Were? You?". The man said, "me" "cool" "oh it is not cool people trying to kill the chosen one all of them are dead and your our only hope to save the world. "What.... I can't save the world i'm just a guy!",said Adrian. The man said, "Here is a Sora Kitana. It is so powerful any other sword can't cut it!"Adrian said,  Tthank you I guss." End of part3

 

 

 

part4 here

So Adrian was walking  and bot a sword holder and got a team the other pepole were named Roberto, Tyler, Ian, and Vinsent. so we finally came to Pian Torcher Place. Pian came and fot us . He was so hard we all most died. But Roberto killed him with his war hammer.  So we walk and walk and walk. part4 end

 

 

 

 

part 5 here     

 

 

 

But there was a strong person named, Big Bill. He had a war hammer and tough armer so we can only kill him in the back side! So we tried and tried, but it was too hard we almost died! Adrian yelled, "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"  He glided black and  sliced him in half. Tyler said, "How did you do that?"  Adrian said, "I...I don't know I just got mad." Roberto said "Hey theres a tape recorder."  Adrian got a tape recorder  and it said " last filter. I'll come to kill you. Get ready for me Shingero. End of part 5 :O

 

 

 

 

 

part 6 here. 

 

          Adrian, Tyler, Ian, and Vinsent got new weapons and they were strong. Adrian got a black sword. Roberto got a heavy war hammer. Tyler got a pistol and a shotgun. Ian got a black suit and a knife to assen people. Last Vinsent got a bow and arrow. end of part 6 

 

 

part 7 could this be the last?

 

 

              It's been 4 years of training, now to fight Shingero.  Adrian said "this is it Shingero's castle." Shingero came out and killed Vinsent in one shot Ian tryed to kill him but Shingero destroyed him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

See this please. :)

 

 

 

Comments (16)

YeChan5c said

at 4:06 pm on Oct 7, 2010

awesome!but kan i edit some of that

Adrian5h said

at 4:25 pm on Oct 7, 2010

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Adrian5h said

at 4:26 pm on Oct 7, 2010

Why?

Jose5m said

at 4:41 pm on Oct 7, 2010

good story but i cant understand some words.

Adrian5h said

at 4:42 pm on Oct 7, 2010

sorry

Nate Krulish said

at 9:23 pm on Oct 10, 2010

Hey Adrian, this is a great story. You have very good ideas. You should think about YeChan's offer to help with some of the words. You know, he doesn't have to change it, he could just go into your page and then put what he thinks should be change in your story in a DIFFERENT color and then you could decide if you like that change or not...what do you think?

Jose5m said

at 4:44 pm on Oct 7, 2010

it's still good that's what i got to say.

Adrian5h said

at 4:52 pm on Oct 7, 2010

ok :)

Jose5m said

at 2:44 pm on Oct 8, 2010

hey yours is mush better now that you 5 chapters.

Jose5m said

at 3:49 pm on Oct 8, 2010

this awsnome

YeChan5c said

at 6:05 am on Oct 11, 2010

thank adrian.and why i want to edit this is like mr.krulish was saying,CREATIVE.sounds ok if i edit yours......not to change yoe story?

Giselle5m said

at 3:09 pm on Oct 12, 2010

asome story adrian

Mikaela5h said

at 3:20 pm on Oct 13, 2010

cool story Adrain

Jose5m said

at 2:00 pm on Nov 9, 2010

i still say it is awsome

Giselle5m said

at 6:01 pm on Nov 9, 2010

NIce

Jose5m said

at 2:01 pm on Jan 28, 2011

Hey Adrian this is great with that slideshow

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